Post by Andromeda Nikki Potter-Lupin on Aug 3, 2007 6:17:32 GMT -5
Don't worry... I am just rewriting the whole story to make it sound better. *sigh* I really need to visit this place more often... the same with my RPG board. Anyway, I have changed the names of the two OFCs... mine has been changed to Caelyn and Patty's is Rachel.
Prologue: Reliving the Past
1975
"...we can't be together anymore."
Caelyn froze, staring unblinkingly at her werewolf boyfriend. His amber eyes didn't betray what he was feeling so it was hard to know if what he was saying was true or not. Her blue-gray eyes started to tear up.
"Why not?"
Remus took in a deep breath then looked her in the eyes. It hurt him to see his mate in such pain, but he would not let her continue to be in danger because of him. He knew what he was going to say next would destroy her.
"Because I don't love you anymore. I become embarrassed around you."
His words stabbed her already shattering heart. A lonely tear escaped from her eyes and traveled down her cold cheek. She bowed her head as he walked away, her tears falling more quickly now. Caelyn didn't care that she fell to her knees in the cold wet snow, she didn't care that it was terrifyingly cold outside. Nothing else mattered anymore other than her broken heart.
1977
Caelyn stormed away, not wanting to hear another word coming out of his mouth. Tears strolled down her face and dripped onto her robes. Severus Snape turned out to be just like Lupin.... he had her heart in his hands and he stabbed it. She locked herself in an empty broom closet and let her tears fall unabandoned. It was there and then that she decided to never let herself fall in love again. Never.
1981
The end of October was a day to be remembered throughout history. James and Lily Potter were killed by Voldemort but somehow their only son, Harry, survived. No one but the closest friends of the young parents knew that Harry had a twin sister, Allison. She too suffered at the hands of the Dark Lord and managed to survive.
Caelyn had gotten married to Regulus Black, Sirius Black's younger brother. That was before he was murdered. She now lived with her best and closest friend, Rachel Harrison, along with her child Naomi Black. Rachel was the only one, other than Regulus, who knew that Naomi wasn't really Regulus' child but Remus Lupin's.
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end of prologue
kinda rushed but i needed to get that out before i lost it all. here comes chapter one
Prologue: Reliving the Past
1975
"...we can't be together anymore."
Caelyn froze, staring unblinkingly at her werewolf boyfriend. His amber eyes didn't betray what he was feeling so it was hard to know if what he was saying was true or not. Her blue-gray eyes started to tear up.
"Why not?"
Remus took in a deep breath then looked her in the eyes. It hurt him to see his mate in such pain, but he would not let her continue to be in danger because of him. He knew what he was going to say next would destroy her.
"Because I don't love you anymore. I become embarrassed around you."
His words stabbed her already shattering heart. A lonely tear escaped from her eyes and traveled down her cold cheek. She bowed her head as he walked away, her tears falling more quickly now. Caelyn didn't care that she fell to her knees in the cold wet snow, she didn't care that it was terrifyingly cold outside. Nothing else mattered anymore other than her broken heart.
1977
Caelyn stormed away, not wanting to hear another word coming out of his mouth. Tears strolled down her face and dripped onto her robes. Severus Snape turned out to be just like Lupin.... he had her heart in his hands and he stabbed it. She locked herself in an empty broom closet and let her tears fall unabandoned. It was there and then that she decided to never let herself fall in love again. Never.
1981
The end of October was a day to be remembered throughout history. James and Lily Potter were killed by Voldemort but somehow their only son, Harry, survived. No one but the closest friends of the young parents knew that Harry had a twin sister, Allison. She too suffered at the hands of the Dark Lord and managed to survive.
Caelyn had gotten married to Regulus Black, Sirius Black's younger brother. That was before he was murdered. She now lived with her best and closest friend, Rachel Harrison, along with her child Naomi Black. Rachel was the only one, other than Regulus, who knew that Naomi wasn't really Regulus' child but Remus Lupin's.
~*~*~*~*~
end of prologue
kinda rushed but i needed to get that out before i lost it all. here comes chapter one